martes, 12 de octubre de 2010

Descriptive Essay

My Wonderful Gift: My Mom

Outline:

I. Introduction
II. Positive Aspects
a) Wonderful
b) Adorable
c) Trustworthy
d) Sincere
e) Wise
f) Helpful
g) Protective
h) Lovely
i) Kind-hearted
III. Things she gives me...
a) Care
b) Courage to do things
c) Love
d) Self-confidence
e) Attention
IV. Likes and Dislikes
a) Likes
-Family living
-Gives solutions to any kind of problem
b) Dislikes
-Hypocrisy
-Gossipy people
V. Conclusion


Before the ninth month of gestation, I was desperate to be born in this world. The first reason to felt like that was because I wanted to know the person who was always talking to me with those beautiful words that made me feel beloved. Inside the belly of that wonderful person, I could feel her hands caressing me in spite of the fact that she was not touching me literally. Those caresses made me feel the softness of her hands which represented all the love she feels for me. Also inside the belly of this person, I could listen to every sweet and lovely word coming out of her mouth, while caressing me. With everything what I felt and listened from this person, I had many conflicting feelings, but this did not make me lose the sight of my goal, which was to know everything about this person. When I was born and I looked at that person who had been with me these nine months, I noticed that the person was a wonderful gift given by God, and that from now she is going to be my mom.

Over time and with coexistence, I have been discovering through my senses that the gift God gave me has aspects that identify her as a unique and unrivalled person. I have noticed that my mom is wonderful simply because when I see her, I can see and feel how amazing and fantastic she is, since I can notice this to long distance because these aspects are impregnated in her personality. She is also adorable because every time we spoke, she does it with a soft and pleasant voice that inspires on me love and admiration. My mom is a trustworthy person or a person in who you can trust, since you can tell her any kind of things, she always will be there to listen to you very carefully every time you need it. She is like a grave when someone tells her their things, because she does not like to disclose them. She only wants to keep them for her, because she likes to be faithful. Every time I want to tell her my things (problems, concerns, thoughts, feelings, etc), she always waits for me with a smile. When she listens to me, she tries to be as sincere as possible when she gives me her points of view, even though I sometimes get mad with her because in some occasions we do not think in the same way. I know that she is always wise and knows the truth, like all moms, but I sometimes blind myself. I also know that she gives me those comments with the whole love of the world, because she wants my well and also because she wants to help me. Sometimes when she gives me her points of view, I feel like in a judgment, first because she makes a poker face and asks me any kind of questions, and second, because she tells me first, that I have to listen to her, and after listening to her, I can decide if I take or not her advice, since she tells me that it depends on me because it is my life. I know that she does all these things for me because she wants to protect me of any kind of things, people, and situations; it is like she wants to keep me in a bubble. With all the positive aspects mentioned, there are also two more that are derived from these, which are that, she is a lovely and kind-hearted person. There is no explanation for these two positive aspects, since their meaning is extraordinary and inexplicable like the reflection of my mom.

All the aspects mentioned have made me realize that these aspects are nothing compared to what my mom has given me until today. I know that she gives them to me, because for her I am one of the most important people. One of the things she has given me is care, because since I was a baby, she has showed me this care every time she embraces me in a soft and delicate manner. Until today, she still does this for me every time she sees that I need some of those hugs. Another way she has shown me her care is by protecting me from all the bad things that are in my way, since she is like a wild animal protecting her cub. Another thing my mom has given me is courage to do all the things I want, since every time I listen to her speak, she is always doing it with lovely words and with a sight that reflects the courage I need. She also has given me the most important aspects for me which are: love, self-confidence and attention. Whenever my mom is with me, I can smell, perceive, and hear all the love she has for me, and I know this because my mom is love. I have self- confidence, due to the fact that I have seen that my mom has it, so she has been transmitting me this from every pore of her skin. Another thing that she has been transmitting me with every pore of her skin and with her actions is the attention that I have from her, since she is always keeping an eye on me also of what happens to me. With all the things I have mentioned, you can notice that my mom is an extraordinary person.

As any extraordinary person, my mom also has likes and dislikes, which they make her even more extraordinary. One of her likes is that she loves family living, and she transmits this by each one of her five senses. She transmits this with her sight because her eyes always show a sensational shine, with her hearing because she always listens to any good or bad comment, with her touch because she gives caresses all the time, with her smell because she always smells happiness, concern, problems, etc., and with her taste because she can distinguish when each one of her children is doing something good or bad. Another thing she likes to do is to help people find solutions to any kind of problem, since my mom is a kind-hearted person, and due to this, she first thinks of others before thinking about herself. One of the things my mom hates is when people pretend to be one person, but in fact they are another. When she realizes that she has met a hypocritical person her face turns red from anger, because she thinks that we should show us how we are. Another thing she dislikes is communicative people, that is to say, gossipy people. She dislikes them because they do not have an own life. One of the things she has done in front of this type of people is to show them an angry face, that is to say, she frowns. She does this because she wants that these people notice that she is angry because they are talking about things that do not matter for them. Now you have noticed that my mom as any other person also has reactions to certain situations.

To sum up, now I can say that God could not have given me a better gift, since my mom has everything I expect. She has wisdom, a good heart, courage, love, self-confidence, and any other values you can imagine, and that I could not write in this essay.

1 comentario:

  1. Well. first of all I did not find grammar mistakes, your grammar is good; On the other hand,
    Oh girl! what an essay...
    My mother is the most important person in the world for me; I think that we share the same feeling, and It is wonderful, isn't it?
    I was able to imagine when you were in her belly, WOw! I liked it so much, why I did not write about my mom...Damn!

    ;D

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